Introductory paragraph and Thesis statement about paper of The Alchemist

Introductory paragraph

Introduce the topic by grabbing the audience’s attention

In Paulo Coelho’s The Alchemist, there is an interesting question I want to ask, does love can help people achieve?

Narrow the topic by leading into the thesis

“And, when you want something, all the universe conspires in helping you to achieve it.” A quote from The Alchemist point an idea which describes the function of achievement that when you have desires. The most common desire is love. There are several types of love appear in this book, which can help you when you have demands.

Thesis statement

In Paulo Coelho’s The Alchemist, there is an interesting question I want to ask, does love can help people achieve? “And, when you want something, all the universe conspires in helping you to achieve it.” A quote from The Alchemist point an idea which describes the function of achievement that when you have desires. The most common desire is love. There are several types of love appear in this book, which can help you in a positive way and negative way. So, love as a potential power to help people to achieve when people have demanded.